But if anyone ever said this to me, he'd be waking up on the sidewalk hours later-----alone, and with a welt on his face. (Actually, someone did imply it once; He got off easy, though, and I just never spoke to him again.) Sad how rhyming any kind of bad advice makes it sound like good advice. And if you're romantic enough to fall for it, I sure hope you're mad enough to love a living tragedy...
Of which I could tell a few, thus I fail to understand this (accusedly teenage) need to throw your wits away, or to pay artistic tribute to the idea...
Never faved a typography piece in my life, not the likes of this anyway. But the way you applied the fonts to every word makes you sing while you read it. I mean, it's like every font is assigned to a certain note, pitch and stress you deserve the DD, everyone who creates something that is considered art deserves it
i dont really like the message, and i find it a little too simplistic. The poetic value of the words lacks fluidity, aesthetic, and depth (and though i understand they're lyrics from katy pary, i'm criticizing the artist's choice in using them, not the artists poetic talent.) That, as well as the lackluster composition and media the piece represents, i give it a 1/10.
Like I said its not a bad piece. Topography has its place, and your an excellent artist cause I looked through your gallery. I just think this spot should be reserved for a drawing that took time and effort, maybe one of your other drawings or pieces another artist did.
Wonderful colors and great use of so many different typefaces. It might have looked better with just slightly fresher colors, or with a bit of white in it, now it looks a bit... dusty. It's not bad though. But really, amazing work!
I think the last few lines don't read very well, 'we can we die dance until we'll be young you and I forever'. The appearance of height, size, and level of eye attraction (darker before lighter, big before small) affecting the chronology it is seen, and thus read. At least that's how I'm having trouble with it. so maybe keep that in mind in the future? ^^
Posie1200Featured By OwnerDec 7, 2011Student Digital Artist
I think the lines "we can dance until we die" flows very well because the "we can dance until" part is in a different font as well as a different color. Also, English speakers know very well that "we can we die dance until we'll be young you and I forever" makes no sense what-so-ever.